Aggressive Make-Out Noises

I like the star effect in Varg's ears, eyes, and feet, it's just too cool. Same goes for Kolsten's lung dragon design, I like how his ears are arranged to resemble horns. As for the piece itself, it's precious...and kind of funny. Correct me if I'm wrong, but consider this:

Grem lack reproductive organs and are genetically engineered and programmed to fill specific roles. Their lack of genitalia means they wouldn't have any kind of sex drive or breeding instinct. Heck, they probably don't even understand the idea of sexual intercourse beyond what they learn from outside sources.

It's funny because Kol and Varg probably have no idea what they're doing or why it's such a big deal. They're just touching and sitting on eachother in awkward positions, trying to engage in a bizarre, human courtship ritual they're physically and biologically incapable of experiencing. On the other hand, their feelings for eachother are genuine and even they're incapable of feeling the rush of a night of passion, they're doing it because they think it will make their partner happy. And that's just sweet.

But I digress, good job.